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[adiva_calandia]

Okay. I need feedback.

Pandora: A Greek Play in Two Parts.

If you want to just read for fun, awesome -- I hope you enjoy it. :) I would love it, though, if you could take an extra minute or two and tell me:

~What you liked
~What you hated (or disliked, if you'd like to be charitable)
~What confused you

If you rave unconditionally about it, I will be pleased but suspicious. :P

Grazie!

Comments

[skygiants]

*raises hand* I will weigh in on the formality-vs-informality tone: I really like Prometheus' informality and his flippancy. And Epithemeus seems to have a little less than he does, which I think is cool, especially when you contrast Prometheus with Zeus, who is much more formal and stiffer. I might make Pandora a little more formal than the two of them? Because she's new, too, and hasn't had time to pick up slang/figure out that you can shorten words and still have them mean the same thing. If that makes sense.

[adiva_calandia]

. . . Iiiiinteresting. *cryptic*

Excellent point about Pandora. Thanks for the feedback!