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[adiva_calandia]

Okay. I need feedback.

Pandora: A Greek Play in Two Parts.

If you want to just read for fun, awesome -- I hope you enjoy it. :) I would love it, though, if you could take an extra minute or two and tell me:

~What you liked
~What you hated (or disliked, if you'd like to be charitable)
~What confused you

If you rave unconditionally about it, I will be pleased but suspicious. :P

Grazie!

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[the_croupier]

Another thought: Would the play be stronger somehow if we actually saw the price Prometheus paid for giving fire to humanity in the second part? As opposed to only seeing Epimethus' reaction to it?

It might not be helped by that. I'm not sure. So just posing the question.