1) Okay, so theme didn't come across. If I shortened the Prometheus bit and lengthened the Pandora bit, would that help, do you think?
3) More formality to speech patterns. Got it. Do you think if the Chorus spoke less formally, the other characters' speech would be less odd? Or is it fundamentally a character thing?
. . . Wow, "character thing." Great specificity, huh? ;)
I am intrigued by the idea of showing Prometheus' price. I'll have to poke at it and see if there's a way I could do it without getting gratuitous.
Final question: Can you tell me exactly what you think the theme of the play was?
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Date: 2007-09-23 04:31 am (UTC)1) Okay, so theme didn't come across. If I shortened the Prometheus bit and lengthened the Pandora bit, would that help, do you think?
3) More formality to speech patterns. Got it. Do you think if the Chorus spoke less formally, the other characters' speech would be less odd? Or is it fundamentally a character thing?
. . . Wow, "character thing." Great specificity, huh? ;)
I am intrigued by the idea of showing Prometheus' price. I'll have to poke at it and see if there's a way I could do it without getting gratuitous.
Final question: Can you tell me exactly what you think the theme of the play was?