2011-01-18

adiva_calandia: (Default)
2011-01-18 12:27 pm

[via e-mail]

Just donated blood! As my dad said on the phone (before my battery died),
between donating blood and escorting at Planned Parenthood I ought to be
building up a lot of good karma.

The only other particularly exciting thing today was that I was informed by
a sophomore that smooth transitions in writing is also known as *
elegance
*, As We Call It In Style And Rhetoric. Thank you, sophomore! I
never would have known that my choppy transitions were *inelegant* if
you hadn't brought your keen, Style And Rhetoric trained eye to it!

(Her other critiques were fine, and she was right about the choppy
transitions, but for goodness' sake. *amused*)